Treatment Feedback

Ela, Jamsheed and myself presented a power-point slide presentation on our treatment for our short film today, and we were given the following feedbacks:

• Change the scene of the boy being chased- I agree that we should change it as we have no significant idea to replace that scenario with. Hence, we replaced it on our second drafted treatment plan.
• We were question by our class 'why were we using animation?'- In a sense, I did understand the class' confusion towards this, as it did not make sense to have animation in an action and adventure scene; therefore, we changed the entire plot of why the boy was running and our final plan for it is in the second drafted treatment plan.

Due to me not being able to upload the power-point presentation tonight, I will be uploading it tomorrow with the assistance of my media teacher! =)